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(AN/ Just to let you know
F/S = Favourite Snack
F/C = Favourite Colour
F/M = Favourite meal
ON WITH THE STORY! /AN)

Chapter 1 - The beginning  

You hissed in pain as you unlocked the door to your house. You had been beat up AGAIN by the most popular sluts in your school. Ugh, Why me? you asked yourself as you dragged yourself into the house. It was a fairly large house, as your parents were fairly wealthy because of their jobs. You sighed and walked into the kitchen, grabbing (F/S) before trudging upstairs to your room.

You dropped your bag and went to your desk, placing down (F/S) and pressing the power button on your Computer. Homework could come later, as you had your favourite game to play.

Minecraft

You slipped off your clothes and grabbed a pair of jeans, a Legend of Zelda t-shirt and a (F/C) hoodie and changed as the computer powered up. You couldn't help but smile as you saw that pixelated dirt block on your desktop as you sat on your desk chair, clicking on the icon and watched the game open up.

- Hours later -

You shot down another skeleton an arrow
"Yeah, finally got ya' you little shit" You said, smirking as you got your revenge. You picked up the things it dropped and sprinted back to your house. You took this chance to check the time
"Wow, it's late, I better get some dinner." You mumbled to yourself, forgetting to pause the game as you got up and walked out the door, rubbing your eyes and yawning and you walked downstairs and into the kitchen, quickly making (F/M) and a can of Monster before walking back upstairs, eating some of it on the way up and kicking open the bedroom door and back to your seat, placing the plate and drink on the desk and sitting down.

What you saw next puzzled you.

You were outside, even though you had left your character inside the house. It was also foggy, as if the render distance was on short. You didn't know what part of the map you were in, if you were in your map at all. Everything in your inventory was gone, much to your displeasure. You rubbed your eyes and groaned in frustration, looking away from the screen for a few seconds as your frustrated groan turned into a yawn. You looked back and your eyes widened.
'Is that...? No, No It can't be.' You thought as squinted at the screen, trying to get a better look at the blocky figure in the fog. Suddenly the figure disappeared and reappeared right in front of your character. You let out a yelp, closing the window as fast as possible. You tried to control your breathing as it game out in heavy pants.
"He's not real, He can't be real! He's just a story, just a story" You told yourself as you panted. Your entire body froze up as you felt a warm breath on your ear, holding your breath as a deep, gruff voice spoke in your ear

"That's where you're wrong, Little ______"
Did I over use the work you?
Nah
So chapter 1 and the Mysterious Herobrine has appeared!

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:iconderpy-jeff-fangirl:
derpy-jeff-fangirl Featured By Owner May 21, 2015  New Deviant Student General Artist
erhmerhgerd.....0_o
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dragonficz Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2015  New Deviant
*turns into dragon and throws random book* NOPE!!!!! F U!!!!
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Mistpaw89 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2015  Student Writer
I yelling oh fudging Kangaroos Banana
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Wildwolfinvader Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm gonna change the (f/c) hoodie to my Mega Latias hoodie mkay
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:iconpiesareawesome:
piesareawesome Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014
Isn't this on Quotev?
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:iconcompycat:
CompyCat Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2014
.... Is bad that I screamed hysterically when my friend grabbed my shoulders at the later few sentences??
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immortalhawk1234 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014  Student Writer
For favorite snack just had to put nugget in a biscuit 
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DragonXide Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I almost screamed alligator... O.o
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PotionLily Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Story: "That's where you're wrong, Little Lily"
Me: OMFG ALLITERATIONS
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thecatseyefire Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I ADORE this story.
I went through a phase where all I read were X Reader fictions, and this will forever remain my favorite. This must be maybe...the 4th time I've been through it?
The time and detail you put into this really stands out!
Amazing :heart:
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DarkPrincessGirl1 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you! I am honored that you consider this story your favourite. I am honestly surprised people find it as good as they do, as this is my first reader insert. 
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thecatseyefire Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart:
You've certainly got a talent for writing. Its certainly a rather wonderful first try.
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DarkPrincessGirl1 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you!
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thecatseyefire Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:heart:
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Burning-Mary Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
.....My MC character's name is shaba
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FluffyShadowPaw Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
"That's where you're wrong, Little ______"
that sounds weird when my character I'm using for this name is Forgotten
"That's where you're wrong, Little Forgotten"
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DarkPrincessGirl1 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Catchy
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frog6 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Student Artist
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! (Fangirl scream of terror)
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Misty-Wolf-Princess Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
What's weird is that I was ACTUALLY wearing my Zelda tee as I was reading this
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skywolf195 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Student Interface Designer
My name is Skywolf for this... O///O
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splende Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014
omgBig Fool Emoji-03 (Creep Stare) [V2] You wuv me?  I fangirl over creepypasta 

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Silverpelt223 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014
God dannit Hero why are you everywhere!!!
Because I am.
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BloodyMetalAlchmist Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's RAPIN TIME XD
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peapod1281 Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Student Artist
:iconherobrinerapefaceplz: : anytime, love~
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:iconbloodymetalalchmist:
BloodyMetalAlchmist Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
GWAHAHHAHAHAHAHAA
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:iconpeapod1281:
peapod1281 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014  Student Artist
Heehehe
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:iconbloodymetalalchmist:
BloodyMetalAlchmist Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
ya I am a dummy! 
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:iconpeapod1281:
peapod1281 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2014  Student Artist
^V^
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:iconbloodymetalalchmist:
BloodyMetalAlchmist Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
that was good story C:
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:iconpeapod1281:
peapod1281 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Student Artist
Yea
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GirlyPokemonFanLizz Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013
Ive read this whole intire story over and over, but I just love it sooooo sooooo sooooooooooo much
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DarkPrincessGirl1 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you c:
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GirlyPokemonFanLizz Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013
Ur very welcome ;)
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GLB-Production Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Student Artist
OMG so good cant stop re-reading!!
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XxxHidanaxxX Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
-garbs my plate dropping my food- awww shit my food....-hits him up side the head with the plate- BITCH GIMME MY STUFF BACK!!!! D:<
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DarkWinterDay Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
HOLLY SHIT! I VANT TO PUNCH SOMEZING NOW!
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Nikkilove025 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Student Digital Artist
You have no idea how much i fangirl everytime I read one of these XD
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Lizard-Lover1 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Same here...... XD
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fishskillet Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
my OTP!!!!!!
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peapod1281 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Student Artist
Same here
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Alicornpony1234 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconmoarplz: !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please continue.
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animelovein Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013
This is beautiful. Continue!!!!! Moooore!
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MissRebelReaper Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Saw Herobrine
Shat bricks
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Kenziestarblack Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Student Digital Artist
HOLY FUCKING FLYING DUCKS, WHY DOES SPEECHLESSNESS ALWAYS TAKE OVER ME WHEN I READ EPIC STORIES BY EPIC PEOPLE ALSO :iconmoarplz: :iconnaoplz: :iconbadassplz:
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BunnyUtonium Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Student General Artist
holy fuck*spasm*
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